I work in promoting. That is nice to observe, cuts to the chase, and is not deceptive (I assume, by no means performed the sport).

If I had to supply criticism, I would say to attempt to squeeze in some extra gameplay onto the cellphone whereas the CTA is on-screen if doable. You are still underneath 15sec, so possibly you’ll be able to have the cellphone enter the body somewhat bigger at first so you will get a greater glimpse of the gameplay earlier than bringing the CTA in. I might strive to do that with out taking the viewer out of the scene, the one-shot fashion of zooming across the inn could be very efficient, I believe it is value sustaining that.

Did you make this by yourself?